Year 7 and 8 camp

Intro:I think camp is a good opportunity for people to learn new things they can also learn the 3p’s

For:Camp is fun and we all can have a break from school and no uniform

we play fun games and swimming and it is fair for year 7s and 8s

camp is a way to bring people together we can make new friends or

you can play with your friends you already have

Against:It may cost too much for parents to pay for the camp it’s going to be cold at night waking up too early to cold to swim people can be home

sick something dangerous might happen

My first reason is:I think it isn’t a good idea because people might get sick or are allergic to something and you may get hurt it’s going to be hard when people are trying to go to sleep on the hard ground

My second reason is:Some people may be home -sick  and lie because they don’t want their friends think their a scaredy cat and when

My friend Helen and Mya

Hi my name is Sapphire Mckay and i’m going to tell you about my best friend Helen Tuakeu

My best friend Helen Tuakeu

she has curly short black hair her eyes look like jewels when the sun sparkles on her eyes her eyes are brown she has long eyelashes.

she is a type of person who is kind and a person who try’s to protect people

she likes to draw and play on the internet.

My friend Mya Nafoi

My friends name is Mya Nafoi and she has long black curly hair she has beautiful brown eyes she is tall like a giraffe she is a nice and kind person she likes to play on the internet she likes listening to  kpop music i like to talk to her and play with her.

The day i nearly drowned

One beautiful day me and my family went to a deep river up north my cousin and my auntie went deep into the shimmering water my mum told me to stay in the shallow part but I didnt listen and went into the deep part I suddenly felt that i was sinking I was drowning i tried to touch the bottom but i started to cough and splutter. Ahh help me I’m drowning my auntie swam fast my mum started to cry my auntie saved me I started to faint I could see my auntie she put her hands on my chest to give me more air. I open my eye’s and i hugged my auntie i was hugging her so hard she could’nt breath after that we all ate a magnificent burger we rested and went back into the river and you know what happened next I did it again .I tarted to drown my mum cried my auntie saved me we ate this time I know that I should wait for my auntie to teach me how to swim.

Show not tell

I was sweaty, my head was burning, I felt weak and my throat started to hurt. Water I need water, my heart started to erupt I felt like I was being cooked in the oven,  steaming like lava. My face looked like steaming red flames.

Pt England School

I am at Pt England School in 2013.