I was sweaty, my head was burning, I felt weak and my throat started to hurt. Water I need water, my heart started to erupt I felt like I was being cooked in the oven, steaming like lava. My face looked like steaming red flames.
Hi Sapphire! You have a great show not tell story. I loved all the words you used Especially "Steaming like lava" I hope you will write another show not tell story in the future.
Hello Sapphire I read your writing about show not tell it is really cool. I liked how you put in interesting words.I hope you write some more about something like that.From Sarona
Hi Sapphire!
ReplyDeleteYou have a great show not tell story. I loved all the words you used Especially "Steaming like lava" I hope you will write another show not tell story in the future.
thanks Mya
DeleteHello Sapphire
ReplyDeleteI read your writing about show not tell it is really cool. I liked how you put in interesting words.I hope you write some more about something like that.From Sarona
Thank you sarona i like your show not tell to
DeleteHi Sapphire!
ReplyDeleteI like your show not tell and i hope you do more show not tell.
You are really good at it!
Thankyou Helen you are too
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