This blog is a record of my learning while I was a student at Point England School.
Hi Sapphire!You have a great show not tell story. I loved all the words you used Especially "Steaming like lava" I hope you will write another show not tell story in the future.
Hello SapphireI read your writing about show not tell it is really cool. I liked how you put in interesting words.I hope you write some more about something like that.From Sarona
Thank you sarona i like your show not tell to
Hi Sapphire!I like your show not tell and i hope you do more show not tell. You are really good at it!
Thankyou Helen you are too
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