Wednesday, 30 October 2013

Malala Prize Nomination

                                          Kiwi Kids News

News Article Headline

Malala Yousafzai
she was nominated to be the nobel prize winner
She is from parkenstarn
We will see at the end of  October if she has won
because she was campaigning for woman

Rewrite the article in your own words

                                         Malala nominated for nobel peace prize
Malala nominated for nobel peace prize:She was nominated because she was making a plan on making an education camp for women, But the Taliban didn’t like what she was doing so they shot her in the head and the neck she had to travel to the UK because the Taliban in parkenstarn would try to shoot her again we will see in october if she had won.

Opinion and Why:
What do you think about this news and why
I think Malala is an humble, wise and a person who fights for equal rights for males and females I think this article is interesting and I didn't know that the average was 62 but Malala was 15 when she was nominated.

What are some questions this article has prompted that you may like to find out the answers to
what is it like in parkenstarn?
Why aren't women allowed to get a good education?
Why aren't there equal rights in parkenstarn?

Monday, 14 October 2013

Going To The Beach Writing Sample

Today we had to write a sample in 40 minutes

Going to the beach

Feeling excited, my heart was beating so loud I thought I would EXPLODE thankfully I didn't. Today me and my family were going to the beach, we were going there to swim and find some seafood such as Kinna, Mussels, crab, Fish and other sea food.

We hopped into the car and headed straight for the beach. Finally we were there, I could hear the sound of the ocean. Before we had a swim we went on the rocks, I was standing on a very sharp rock and as I went to climb onto the other rock, I slipped and cut my skin then blood started to rush out of my long terrible cut

I found a huge crab climbing up my leg I flicked the crab off and never mentioned It to my family, finally It was time to go home and we all had some fish n chips.

My Two Goals-Using a variety of questions and showing not telling
Two things that was good in my writing-I had interesting words,My writing makes sense